No BS Manuscript Review
I help women who want to write romance, commercial fiction, and book club fiction. If you’re overwhelmed and confused about how to make this dream a reality, I can help.
I have a proven process to help you achieve this goal.
Because “done” doesn’t mean “ready.”
You did it. You wrote the damn book.
That story that’s been living rent-free in your brain for years is finally on the page—and that’s no small feat.
Now you’re wondering… Is it any good?
Does it flow? Will an agent actually read past chapter one?
Or worse—will they send the dreaded “This just isn’t right for my list” email that really means, the story’s not working?
That’s where I come in.
The No-BS Manuscript Review is a deep developmental edit meets strategic coaching session designed to show you exactly what’s working, what’s not, and—most importantly—why.
Who It’s For
This review is perfect for you if:
- You’ve completed a full draft (or very close) and want to know if your story works before you query or self-publish.
- You didn’t work with a coach through the writing process and want professional eyes on your structure, character arc, pacing, and narrative drive.
- You feel too close to the manuscript to see what’s missing—but you’re not ready (or don’t need) a full line edit.
- You want honest, actionable feedback without sugar-coating or jargon.
If you’ve ever thought, “I just wish someone would tell me what’s wrong—and how to fix it,” this is exactly that.
What’s Included
Your No-BS Manuscript Review includes:
- A full developmental read of your manuscript (up to [insert word count limit—usually 80K–90K]) focused on structure, character arcs, narrative logic, pacing, tension, and reader engagement.
- A detailed editorial letter (10–15 pages) outlining the key issues and opportunities within your story—what’s working, what’s falling flat, and where to focus your revision energy.
- A “Fix-First” roadmap so you’ll know exactly where to start revising (and what to ignore for now).
- Specific suggestions for addressing each issue—no vague “make it stronger” notes here.
- A 60-minute follow-up call to walk through the feedback, answer your questions, and help you build a clear plan forward.
This isn’t just an edit—it’s an education in how to think like an editor. You’ll walk away with the confidence to revise smart, not aimlessly.
What Makes This Different
Most editors hand you a letter and wish you luck.
I don’t do that.
My No-BS Manuscript Review goes beyond what’s wrong—it gives you:
- Clarity on what’s actually holding your story back.
- Confidence in what’s already strong (because yes, there’s plenty that’s working).
- A clear, doable path to take your draft from “finished” to publishable.
I’m not just an editor; I’m a certified book coach and novelist who’s been where you are. I know what agents look for, what makes readers fall in love, and what keeps good stories from getting noticed.
I’ll tell you the truth (kindly, but clearly), then help you turn that truth into your next breakthrough.
The Result
By the end, you’ll:
- Understand exactly what your book needs to shine.
- Have a prioritized revision plan instead of a mountain of confusion.
- Feel confident about what to do next—query, revise, or prep for self-publishing.
Because you don’t need another “maybe someday.”
You need a plan that gets your book ready for the world.
Click the button below to schedule a discovery call to chat with me about your manuscript to find out if my No-BS Manuscript Review is right for you.
INVESTMENT
This isn’t a quick edit or a “light dusting” of your prose.
It’s a deep dive into your story’s structure, pacing, character arcs, and narrative drive—plus a clear roadmap to fix what’s not working.
The $1495 investment reflects the level of attention, expertise, and partnership I bring to your book. You’re not just paying for notes—you’re investing in your growth as an author and the future success of your novel.
Most editors hand you a document and wish you luck.
I hand you a strategy, a plan, and the confidence to move forward.
Because if you’ve come this far, you deserve more than a “good job.” You deserve feedback that gets you across the finish line.
Click the button to schedule a call to see if my No-BS Manuscript Review is right for you.